Revise the sentence using a stronger verb

  1. What is a Verb?
  • A verb is a word that shows an action or state of being. Examples of verbs include run, jump, eat, and is.
    Example: “The dog barked.”

  1. What is a Strong Verb?
  • A strong verb is a verb that is more descriptive and specific, making the action clearer and more interesting.
    Example: Instead of saying “The cat walked,” you could say “The cat sprinted.”

  1. Why Use Stronger Verbs?
  • Make Writing More Exciting: Strong verbs add energy and excitement to sentences.
  • Create a Clearer Picture: They help readers visualize the action better.
  • Enhance Understanding: They provide more information about how an action is performed.

  1. How to Identify Stronger Verbs:
  • Think about how the action is performed.
    Example: Instead of “He ran,” consider how he ran: Was it fast, slow, or with style?
  • Use action words that show the manner of the action.
    Example: Instead of “She said,” try “She whispered,” “shouted,” or “exclaimed.”

  1. Examples of Revising Sentences with Stronger Verbs:
  • Original Sentence: The girl looked at the sky.
    Revised Sentence: The girl gazed at the sky.
  • Original Sentence: The dog ran to fetch the ball.
    Revised Sentence: The dog bolted to fetch the ball.
  • Original Sentence: He talked to his friend.
    Revised Sentence: He chatted with his friend.

  1. Practice Activity:
  • Provide students with sentences that use weak verbs. Ask them to revise the sentences using stronger verbs. Example:
    • Weak Sentence: “The boy went to the park.”
    • Strong Sentence: “The boy raced to the park.”