Revise the sentence using a stronger verb
key notes:
- What is a Verb?
- A verb is a word that shows an action or state of being. Examples of verbs include run, jump, eat, and is.
Example: “The dog barked.”
- What is a Strong Verb?
- A strong verb is a verb that is more descriptive and specific, making the action clearer and more interesting.
Example: Instead of saying “The cat walked,” you could say “The cat sprinted.”
- Why Use Stronger Verbs?
- Make Writing More Exciting: Strong verbs add energy and excitement to sentences.
- Create a Clearer Picture: They help readers visualize the action better.
- Enhance Understanding: They provide more information about how an action is performed.
- How to Identify Stronger Verbs:
- Think about how the action is performed.
Example: Instead of “He ran,” consider how he ran: Was it fast, slow, or with style? - Use action words that show the manner of the action.
Example: Instead of “She said,” try “She whispered,” “shouted,” or “exclaimed.”
- Examples of Revising Sentences with Stronger Verbs:
- Original Sentence: The girl looked at the sky.
Revised Sentence: The girl gazed at the sky. - Original Sentence: The dog ran to fetch the ball.
Revised Sentence: The dog bolted to fetch the ball. - Original Sentence: He talked to his friend.
Revised Sentence: He chatted with his friend.
- Practice Activity:
- Provide students with sentences that use weak verbs. Ask them to revise the sentences using stronger verbs. Example:
- Weak Sentence: “The boy went to the park.”
- Strong Sentence: “The boy raced to the park.”
let’s practice!